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posted January 31st, 2017, 12:33 pm


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January 31st, 2017, 12:33 pm

ajlozano

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YEAH got this page up! TuT sorry been suuuuper busy coloring!!! I swear just trying to earn some money!!! Hopefully it doesn't take forever for the next page. Thankx for the patience!!

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January 31st, 2017, 9:22 pm

comicreader (Guest)

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I'm so invested in this story! Keep the updates coming! :D

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February 3rd, 2017, 12:55 am

The-Common-Loon

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Hey! After the procession is shown the numbers make a lot more sense and add to the story again. I think the problem I had with the first of the 3 pages was just the jarring dark start with the numbers and him lying down so the time line of 'was this earlier or a series of many times in the past' flow was messed up. Now at the most I would have just needed to have my perspective fixed by this page to know what it meant.
I like that the numbers added tension to the feeling and the relief of it though once the mother was gone.
Still love the story and now we get to see the boys talking and hanging out w each other for a day, great!

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February 18th, 2017, 8:44 pm

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@The-Common-Loon: Awesome, Awesome!! I always worry when i try to do something a little more (don't know if abstract is the right word) but basically something like these last 3 pages for sure X0. Reeeally good to know it came together and make sense! TuT

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